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Love

I hate it when you go away
I hate it when you never stay
I miss you so much
I love your touch
I hope you come back some day

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  • Flight of Dragons
    February 29, 2008
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    Oh sad. . .and cute and . . .just a good write. Well done


  • Kelli Marie
    February 29, 2008

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    A wonderfully written five lines. I can feel the loneliness and the pain of missing someone love. Very nicely done. Good luck.
    Kelli