"Mommy, why daddy is bald?"
"Because he's intelligent"
"Why is your hair long?"
Author notes
No male supremacy intended.
A contest entry
- 13 words....20 spots....13 winners......Make me LAUGH! Please!!!! by islekine.
600 points, ended March 5, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me feel again by lilblueeyesmine1978.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haha!!! by siddy jones.
450 points, ended April 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Laughter by Silent-Myst.
588 points, ended April 25, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Smile even if your breath stinks! by Melvina.
450 points, ended May 2, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me :) SMILE by ixtli.
300 points, ended May 30, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Something To Make Me Laugh by Fire-Fly.
500 points, ended July 2, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended July 7, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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haha... nice! you sexist git! lol... my hair is in the middle though, so I can't complain too much.
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Cute and amusing. It's just the kind of thing a child would say!
Well done and good luck in my contest. -
This made me smile! Very funny and cute poem!
Keep on writing,
~ Bright Smyles
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short, sweet, and cute! Good luck and thanks for entering my contest!
~cheers~ -
LOL
That child is going to be a lawyer someday! -
Hah that's a very good one. Short and sweet. Was this really said or just something you thought of.. either way I liked it
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HAHAHA is this a true story? It reads like one. You gotta love kids!
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cute and funny. good luck in the contest.
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cute to the point and fyunny. thanks for entering and I wish you the best of luck. I really liked this very much. I can just imagine one of my brats saying these very same things.
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this is about the cutest piece I've ever read.
I enjoyed this so much.
It was great, out of the mouth of a child LoL.
Good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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that is such a funny three lines... I can see why you won honorable mention! I really like children, well, my little nephew at least, and he asks such strange questions also - very honest and believable poem - well done indeed!
Keep writing
Polly
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this made me laugh!
a very believable interaction with a child, which makes it all the more humorous. great wit/humor in just three short lines. i'm impressed -
This one is the funniest one here
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LOL.....
Glad it wasn't intended! It wouldn't have been accepted! lol...Thanks for a great write!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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this is funny because I could just image a child actually asking their parent this. well done and best of luck
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funny
good luck in the contest, keep writing, -Amy
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haha. thats terrible, lol. =P
great write and good luck.
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laughing so hard over here. this is really funny i was wondering though if you might have a few of the words switched around in the first line but then i thought coming from a kid, it would make sense that way 
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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lol..too funny. I like this very much. I think it would make a lot of men laugh, and us women too. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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