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singing out my love

my heart is spilling over with emotion.
love for you is coursing through my veins,
pumping and pumping and taking me over.
light shines out through my eyes,
you can see the glistening sparkles
if you look.
my mouth breaks into a wide grin.
I want to take the mic and sing my love
into the air,
so that it might infect everyone and make them happy, too.
and also so that you might hear.

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I wanted to sing you a love song tonight, but there wasn't enough time to sing everything.

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 29, 2008

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    What a wonderfully written love poem. I can feel the love and happiness as I read it. Very nicely done.
    Kelli