It’s a dream,
Not to be seen,
It’s a wish,
Not to be fulfilled,
It’s a song,
Not to be sung,
It’s a prayer,
That won’t be heard.
It’s a fact,
Not to be acknowledged,
It’s a desire,
That should burn within,
It’s a longing,
To be longed for, forever,
It’s a hope,
One can’t aspire.
It’s a deep silence,
Of an ailing heart.
It’s a fight,
Of the inner voices.
It’s a wait,
That will end never,
As it’s love,
Love forever.
A contest entry
- A Lovers Question by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nicely penned! I totally enjoyed every part of this, the romantic in me adores that concept of forever love. I especially liked how you started with a dream and ended with forever. Thanks for entering
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M really glad that you liked my poem.. thanks!
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Nice..
Looks like you have written this from the bottom of your heart. Good work Chirali.. Keep it up!
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thanks!! and when you think you need to point out at something that's not nice or needs to be changed...pls do so...
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I really like this. Has such a easy flow to it making for a smooth read. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you for the morale booster!!
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