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[ out of touch ]

out of touch
my inner most pillars
shaken
tumbling down
to be picked up and reassembled
the same pieces
fit differently
better?
I often wonder
as I metamorph
time and time again
it seems
never ending
this process
of reconstruction
if only the pieces were of higher quality

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  • mmook
    February 29, 2008

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    the power is seen and felt throughout the poem... well done! well express!!!! full of many metaphor.... thanks for sharing


  • Perception
    February 29, 2008

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    Wonderful job... I love the metaphor you are holding here... It really makes me think... I love your beautiful words... and it really how power behind it...

    ~wonderful job

  • jedidaddy74
    February 28, 2008

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    the above comment was mine and not sarah talking about herself.....that would be a little strange....unless she is prone to talking to herself or possably has split personalities.....just kidding....


  • sarahblu
    February 28, 2008
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    very good poem....i like the use of the idea of contantly having to adjust and reform who we are, the last line....well i happen to know the pieces are very good quality. and I think if you look you will see that you know they are too.....