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my last memory of you

cubic teeth spread apart like
the teeth of a zipper,
grinning wildly
as you thrust.

all I can see
is your grin,
lips curled back
to expose your zipper mouth.

this is like every
perverse, disturbing
sexual nightmare
I have ever had



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  • aura
    March 12, 2008

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    lol this is very scary and so not exciting
    i feel you could elaborate more but it is quite direct to the point. A nightmare ey