Your absence has left me:
lifeless and incomplete
without your touch
there is no warmth
without your love
there is no life
I lay here;
dismembered
without a heart
beating in my chest
blood;
cold and still in my veins
~
but upon your return
stoke up the fire
of passion
in my frozen soul
you return the
deadened life
to my decayed
paranoid mind
warmth flowing;
veins rivers of flaming lust
your skin
melting with mine
once more
sewing our incomplete
souls to one;
a perfect entity
with two
avid beating hearts
which drum in
unison as we
bond our souls
to one.
Author notes
I'm not so good at prose.. But, I gave it my all! =D
Prompt:
quote
In a list
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by Aussie Gypsy.
300 points, ended March 3, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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This is fabulous, I love the before and after in this piece, well done on a fine job here
Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Karen -
Deep my friend, a heartfelt write.
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lovely
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this is very nice, I like how you wrote it so spaced out like that.
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