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Leave The World To Darkness And Me

I once read an elegy that struck deep in my veins
And the moon layed out the countryside, clear as day
In the distance, I swear, I saw your form
And I begged you to come back to me once more

But in the end, fate saw me fit to be alone
Content for me to live with the fate I had sewn
And I wish you'd given me a chance to believe
As you left the world and darkness to me

A shadow fell as the church bell rang
And a sigh sank through my body as the older monks sang
One shoe, then the other hit the broken Earth below
Taking me to a place I said I wouldn't go

Author notes

i felt inspired after reading "Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard" by Thomas Gray. this is what followed

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  • darkalesyse
    March 1, 2008

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    great!

    This is amazing and beautiful! I haven't read what has inspired you for this piece but this is very well done. I love the imagery. It brought up emotions I didn't know existed inside myself. Thanks for sharing! It was a pleasure reading.

    ~tiff