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She sips souls like wine

Spell bound enchanted by words from a mistress
Soulful yet condemning in a curious sense
Unknowing of the plot you feel no distress
But for your incipience there's an expense

A soul is nothing to barter with
Hence the warning wrapped around her lips
You must heed the cautionary from your kith
Before she drinks you up in sips

A blundering fool falling for vampiric whores
Just the target she's been looking for
There will be no pity in hell for a soul like yours
So evade her as I've said before

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    March 6, 2008
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    this is pretty cool. i like the rhythm it held
    thank you for entering and best of luck