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Fallen

My life without in it
is one I would quit
I can't repay
all you've done for me
The only thing I can ever say

In my wildest dreams
I couldn't have dreamed of better
My life is complete
I've fallen
So deepy
For you

Being with you is something I just
Can't get enough
I would never
be able to let you go
I want this to last forever
a world without you is one I don't wanna know

In my wildest dreams
I couldn't have dreamed of better
My life is complete
I've fallen
So deepy
For you

I've fallen
For you

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  • Angelflower
    March 28, 2008

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    This is really nice.. The emotion in it was really good in this piece.. I enjoyed it..
    Great write and good luck..
    Peace to you, Jetleena


  • Raging Chaos
    March 2, 2008
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    simple && Sweet
    good love poem

    Good luck in the contest

    -Raging Chaos