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I'm Ready...

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Soft silky kisses
send thrills up my spine.
Floating

as if on clouds

I am consumed

by our love
by our desire.

Melting me
in your arms
I succumb
to your sweet charms.

As your lips roam
all over my body
I feel ready.

To let you know
I'm yours
my love;
so,take me
Take

Me 

Now!

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  • Airborne Ed silver member
    February 29, 2008

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    your words dance across the page with such wonder. The soft poetic passion that you paint before the reader is second to none...

    hummmmmm this truely is a beautiful poem....


  • jasminerose
    February 29, 2008

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    Sweet Angel, such beauty and tender love expressing desires of that special one that holds your heart!
    Beautifully written and a great pleasure to read!
    Simply lovely!
    Linda

  • Bob Fox
    February 28, 2008

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    Well

    Drippingly delicious words of passion and tender love. Makes a soul long for many nights of splendor or perhaps a reversal in age. Oh my.