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Beautiful Cherishment

"If something was to get in your heeeaaad,
an idea you never heard of, a thought never saiiid,
would i cause the pain in your heart?
Would i save you through and through?
Could the beauty in your soul
be the thing i'm needin' too?

You changed my life, with a will of your own
you loved me as i was and uttered not one moan,
I felt i couldn't even try to feel this way
my heart would only break like it had that day.
So hear my thoughts and keep me in your prayers
for i'll cradle you through anything and never leave you in despair.

Baby, don't leave me now, for its all the same
through death, love and pain, we play this sick game.
Your touch leaves me gasping, your heart lights my fire
your very esscence causes my insane need of desire.

So baby when you think of me, think of yourself
for we're one in the same, made of nobody else
we've got forever each other, and i'll see you through,
for if one thing is right, it's of my love for you."

Chorus:

"You changed my life, with a will of your own
you loved me as i was and uttered not one moan,
I felt i couldn't even try to feel this way
my heart would only break like it had that day.
So hear my thoughts and keep me in your prayers
for i'll cradle you through anything and never leave you in despair.


Now one thing i know that is beyond any truth
better than me, but never better than you
more exciting than the plans of life or the treasure of night
is of your love for me, as i am the only in your sight.
So keep me close and never let me go
or baby i'll die just as sure of woe."

Please be as honest as possible, but not to the point where you're just cruel. Be fair, and thanks!

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