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Each Other's Company

Near the sand
Is where we stand
Watching the waves roll in

Soft earth in between
The seasalt air we're smelling
Still watching the swells spin

Lost in the sunset
Our ankles barely wet
Seashells lay not far off

Towels laid out
An umbrella turned down
Others used to scoff

The beach so warm
No possible storm
We don't want to leave

Hands intertwined
Our hearts combined
Enjoying each other's company

Author notes

Meaghan

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  • BrokenReality
    June 14, 2008
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    aww
    so sweet

  • Contemporary
    March 20, 2008

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    It's lovely, really nice. I like the last stanza and how it manages to sum up the two's love. Sounds like one of my poems xD


  • Chocoholic156
    March 16, 2008

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    I like this. I hope you win! Just the joy of being with this person is so evident when i read this. You paint a picture of the beach so perfectly.


  • Angel Wings1960
    March 10, 2008
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    Nice write about romance on the beach.
    Good luck in the contest.


  • Hetha gold member
    March 8, 2008

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    I can't post a link in the comments box, so I IM'd you instead. Please check your messages for the link to the BG I made for this poem. I hope you like it and that it lends well to your awesome work on the poem. If this is collaboration, then I hope I did my part. If you want me to add in the BG, then you will need to add me as a collaborator on your poem.

  • piccola silver member
    March 5, 2008

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    romance at its best on the beach and holding hands is wayyyy romantic. Nice background to. Thank you for the entry.


    • Celtic Legend
      March 5, 2008
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      thank you very much! i hope you find the poem you want in your contest!


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    Great rhyme in this wee poem,
    i liked the setting on the beach with the one you love.
    you give it good imagery, well done.
    Slán Dolores xx


  • jbbrandi
    February 29, 2008
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    Very good. I liked it and it had a very nice rhythym.


  • darkhawk
    February 28, 2008

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    awesome

    great poem! I really loved how you worded it, you really have some talent! Best of luck to you in the future poems you write! please comment on some of mine sometime.

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