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Dark World With Love

The moon is dark but the sun is bright
The grass is green but the durt is brown
Chocolate is brown and Ipods play music
I like puppy's
Do you like puppy's?
Do like my poem?

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  • aeolia
    February 29, 2008
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    The plural of "puppy" is "puppies."


  • darkhawk
    February 28, 2008

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    awesome!

    great poem! I really loved how you worded it, you really have some talent! Best of luck to you in the future poems you write! please comment on some of mine sometime.


  • Akborn08
    February 28, 2008
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    I FUCKINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG LOVEEEEE THIS FUCKING POEM!!