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I Wish

I can still hear his voice
I can't get him out of my head
I keep wishing to forget
but i can't

He was there, but then he left
he never said good bye
I felt empty ,
but i had to get over it
but i couldn't

I loved him
He said it to me over and over
but did he mean it?
I wish i could see him again

I wish i could hear his voice again
i wish he could hug me again
i wish he was here to read this
i wish he was here to kiss me
and tell me he loved me

I wish

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  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 6, 2008

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    So full of pain. But it was just as great. =) It makes me think a little of my ex... except I just want to plain forget him haha I don't want him back though. Nicely down! Keep on writing!


  • Angelflower
    May 4, 2008

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    very sad and expressive.. I liked the fact that you portrayed your emotions so well. this was a good write.. well done..

    Angel


  • VampyEyes
    March 7, 2008

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    THESE PEOMS ARE LIKE ABOUT... x__x our lives.... this makes me think about aaron............ shoot meeeeee! *sobs*


  • lemonhead
    March 1, 2008

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    ... who are you missing?
    Why are you sad?...

    Is this about... one of your previous boyfriends?
    BTW, great poem!
    I love it


    • Wind of Darkness
      March 4, 2008
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      ok u are weird
      and yes it is about an old boyfriend its about cuck ya so ok im bored in 6th


  • Innocent Evil
    February 29, 2008

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    Now you cany be sad! Youve got a boY! YOu have to be happy, look forward! BE HAPPY OR ELSE!!!!!yeah and what cori said Stop wishing and start living


    • Wind of Darkness
      February 29, 2008
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      ok weird person
      well im bored and my mom just got pissed about what i dont know so ya see u later


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
    This is sooooo cute.
    And uber sad.
    Why are you so sad???
    Stop wishing and start living!!!!

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