There it is, that door.
The door you had to open
The door you wish you hadn't.
The door where your life was ruined.
The door where your love was lost.
The door where you cried.
The door where you lied.
The door where your love was murderd.
You had to open the door
To find out what was screaming.
Today you wish you hadn't.
You wish you didn't have to see him.
In agony.
In sorrow.
In pain.
In suffering.
And you opend the door.
The door you wish you never opened.
What is your first impression?
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this is a really good poem. Ive opened too many doors that i wish i hadnt =(
really great
good job =)
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i really like this write.. the image you created can be related to any mistake or reality that we wished we never knew or did..
i hope it wasn't something haunting that you felt after opening this door..i hope its not abuse of any kind
great write.. think again about your title i feel it pretty dull to such a complex write
regards
abuyi
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It happens often to us to "open a door" and regret it. Like the message and the way you wrote it. When you see it at first it looks simple, but it's actually a really deep, good poem.
Keep writing
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it repeats itself too much...
but its still effin awesome.
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This has a lot of hardcore imagery, even for a simplistic poem. My favorite part was the description of the man whom was seen and all that he was going through... It's a little frightening to imagine what that door contained and all the ruin it brought... A very painful write indeed.
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WHAT WAS BEHIND THE DOOR!! That's no fair, you left your reader hanging. What a bummer. Wait, was it your lover in pain, agony, sorrow, and pain? Anyway, I liked the read.
Kelli
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