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Out of the corner of my eye

I spy this Guy
Out of the corner of my eye
And watch him move
And laugh with friends
And curl his hand
Around a girl.
And eat his lunch
I force as much hate as I can
Into my side-long glare
And hope it burns his
face off

Yaaay. Such a happy little poem.

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  • SHOOThernick
    March 12, 2008
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    yay! i sympathize, i applaud!


  • N e a r
    February 28, 2008
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    Dang, this is overbearing.. At first, I thought it was going to be something of a sad and personal lost love... but with ther anger and the line "hope it burns his face off" just stunned me. I really liked this read... simple scenery yet there is a handful of tension between the characters mentioned.... just wow.