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Starting over

Blood to feel the Pain.
Bitterness to hide the shame.

Sobs to feel the tears.

Confidence to hide the dares.

Love to feel the Kiss

Anger to hide the bliss.

 

Dont you ever wish you could just start over...clean slate...push back every thing you have done?  I do.

 

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  • J Kard
    July 18, 2008

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    good one. i liked it. Not very wordy, I know, but I cant find the words for it. it was just...good. lol

  • poetrymd
    June 24, 2008
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    excellent

    I can relate to this well written poem