brown and red
fall to the ground,
they are dead
Author notes
contest, hiku, anything goes, im not sure if this is one, but someone told me it is
A contest entry
- Quote inspired quickie by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 28, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haikus by MyDecember.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Autumn Background & Poetry by poets whisper.
650 points, ended September 23, 17 entries
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Comments
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this is so sad. I never think of the leaves as being dead. They decay and become a part of the earth ... alive and well in a different form; feeding the earth. Thank you for entering the contest.
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cute
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Simple and beautiful.
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Sad simple poem. This looks like haiku.
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So simply stated and real... x
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i guess you were watching those leaves for quite a few seasons
this is kind of sad best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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It says it so well, and rhymes well too. I am bad at rhyming, but I loved the rhyming in this
Short but sweet, loved the read. Hope you do well in the contest with it
Cindy
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A good write here. It is sad that leaves at their prettiest is when they are dying. I wish you luck in the contest.
Kelli
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