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Seven Words

Light of warmth in the dark sky.

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Mostly all I was saying here was that a little bit of happieness is very important in a dark bad time. I hope I got that across in just a few words. Hope you enjoyed it. ^.^

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  • Poesing
    February 28, 2008
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    Yeah, I get it!

    Very poetical! Enjoyed!


  • N e a r
    February 28, 2008
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    This is a beautiful descriptive piece for only seven words. :] Nicely done, fellow poet.

  • Sunshine Princess
    February 28, 2008

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    This is pretty the warmth is light of love that takes away all the pain have a nice evening good lukc in the contest