Serenity resides
On fingertips resting
Upon silken cloth
Leaving impressions on
Malleable skin
Abounded by sweat that
Trickles from every pore and
Evaporates into thin air
Author notes
this is my first ever acrostic. i really like writing these thingys, they require a lot more thought that the conventional poems. i will be writing a lot more of these in the future. option 1
A contest entry
- SOULMATE A.C.R.O.S.T.I.C ~ PIC~ or WORDBANK Option of "3" by LilyRose.
900 points, ended March 2, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
comments from the peanut galllery
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This is great! I really like your word choice and incredibly tactile images. Also, each line break is placed in such a way to create the most impact and emphasis. Wonderful!
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Ohhh I love the uniquely chosen penned words touching the skin leaving the feeling ever lasting, well done.
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well done!
Lovely acrostic. I adore how you conveyed the idea of "soulmates" without ever saying it or anything close to it - just by presenting images.
Wonderful poem!
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wonderfully done! best of luck in the contest sweetie
TAsha
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