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                    How can I review your work?
                    What, truly can I say?
                    Your knowledge of the subject here
                    Beats mine in every way.
                    So, until my skills get better
                    I,ll do reviews this way;
                    I'll read aloud your poetry,
                    And rate it by the flow,
                    By the music of the rhythm
                    And the pictures that you show.
                    When my feelings are awakened
                    My rating will rise too,
                    You'll see all this when I send
                    A review from me to you.

Just my thoughts as a learner poet

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  • condor gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    An early poem that you wrote i suppose when you were still a little unsure of how to go about things. I think it is wonderful and It's the way i look at things to. The flow here is great. It had feeling and a sense of 'I'll tell it like it is' I think you have an excellent grasp on the subject of poetry. I read some of the types of poetry here i have never heard of and still don't know what they are. Poems are poems to me. A good early write, Bob.


    • rbruce gold member
      October 18, 2008
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      Good morning and thanks for your comments on reviewing. I would love to have a greater knowledge than I have so I could give constructive comments all the time without upsetting anyone al all. Personalities are so varied, sometimes I make boo boos and say the wrong thing. I am learning though.


  • poppa
    February 29, 2008
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    Wonderful Bob.....so much honesty within your words love it.......great write ...

    • rbruce gold member
      February 29, 2008
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      Hi Rob, Thank you for commenting on this one. It is true. I think I am a poet and then I read sommething really good and realise I have a lot to learn. Stay well.


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    Wholesome...coulda said Awesome too!

    Love it...exactamundo...how I do IT. Tis why I like yours soooo much
    You take care Bob
    Linda

    • rbruce gold member
      February 29, 2008
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      Thank you Linda. This little piece has certainly made an impact. It goes with "Poetry- Theories and Queries", I think. Cheers.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    That's exactly how I rate poetry too

    Like this! I've got so much to learn myself...


  • darkhawk
    February 28, 2008

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    awesomely spazatronic!

    Great poem, very well thought out, I really loved how you made it work so well, and the wording was out of this world! Great write! Please comment on some of mine I'd love the critique!


  • Elisabeth silver member
    February 28, 2008
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    I'll remember that Bob!
    Lis

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