How can I review your work?
What, truly can I say?
Your knowledge of the subject here
Beats mine in every way.
So, until my skills get better
I,ll do reviews this way;
I'll read aloud your poetry,
And rate it by the flow,
By the music of the rhythm
And the pictures that you show.
When my feelings are awakened
My rating will rise too,
You'll see all this when I send
A review from me to you.
Just my thoughts as a learner poet
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An early poem that you wrote i suppose when you were still a little unsure of how to go about things. I think it is wonderful and It's the way i look at things to. The flow here is great. It had feeling and a sense of 'I'll tell it like it is' I think you have an excellent grasp on the subject of poetry. I read some of the types of poetry here i have never heard of and still don't know what they are. Poems are poems to me. A good early write, Bob.
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Good morning and thanks for your comments on reviewing. I would love to have a greater knowledge than I have so I could give constructive comments all the time without upsetting anyone al all. Personalities are so varied, sometimes I make boo boos and say the wrong thing. I am learning though.
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Wonderful Bob.....so much honesty within your words love it.......great write ...
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Hi Rob, Thank you for commenting on this one. It is true. I think I am a poet and then I read sommething really good and realise I have a lot to learn. Stay well.
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Wholesome...coulda said Awesome too!
Love it...exactamundo...how I do IT. Tis why I like yours soooo much
You take care Bob
Linda
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Thank you Linda. This little piece has certainly made an impact. It goes with "Poetry- Theories and Queries", I think. Cheers.
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That's exactly how I rate poetry too
Like this! I've got so much to learn myself...
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awesomely spazatronic!
Great poem, very well thought out, I really loved how you made it work so well, and the wording was out of this world! Great write! Please comment on some of mine I'd love the critique! -
I'll remember that Bob!
Lis
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