With that very first glance,
You stole my heart.
With that very first smile,
You tore it apart.
From the moment I saw you,
I knew it was true.
From the moment I heard you,
I knew what to do.
In your presence,
I could not speak,
In your beauty,
Mine, just to weak.
These my thoughts,
I keep.
These my feelings,
I leek.
I watch you,
With my heart.
I need you,
From the start.
If only you would see,
How much I love you.
If only you would know,
How much it is true.
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Beautiful
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Nice! It flows very well. Great job. Good luck in the contest
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I don't think its cheesy, I think its wonderful! Great expression...all in all awesome write!
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aww, you may think that this is cheesy but I love it..It is cute and more people that you can realize feel this way., I cannot count how many people have told me about feeling like this. and they thought they were alone...so I guess what I am getting at is great write!
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Really good poem. how bittersweet, well good luck to you
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