paranoia, paranoia
allodoxaphobia
down the hands of darkened halls
water falls, water falls
public based by adoration
revelation, revelation
seek the one that life abhors
lock your doors, lock your doors
twisted souls and aspiration
infiltration, infiltration
paranoia, paranoia
allodoxaphobia
Author notes
allodoxaphobia is a fear of opinion.
valence is the capacity of one thing to react to another in some special way... but i got it out of the valence shell in atoms... seems to fit more that i thought.
this ones for you to enjoy
A contest entry
- Silvosian Rhymes Group Contest #3 by Silvos..
600 points, ended April 15, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
well give it to me straight
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I loved that! the repetitions gave it a unique depth. Loved it, great write
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wow. that was interesting and dark, the repetition sends chills down my spines. also i love the contrast in the first and last stanza with the others, because the repetition happens first in those ones.
nicely done and very different.
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Wow sis! This is really cool! I've never read a poem in that style before, and of course it'd take someone as creative as you to bring it forward! Simply amazing. Fear of opinion huh? I WISH I had that lol! Keep it up, love ya lots. Hope to hear from you soon!
~Hannah
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I love this one, I don't get it how your poems are so bunny awesome and mine suck but whatever. I love how you repeat yourself it's awesome, it is very breathtaking.
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simple the only reason mine are more refined (your DO NOT suck!) is because i've had more practice. that's all. i'm no great at it or anything
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Love it, very much so. Another well sucess in a style, that I have rarely read. The repetion of the first and last stanza topped me off.
Another greta write,
Silvos.
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thankees. Silvos.
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