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White Gown

The bride walks to the table,
Just as it was a fable.
She watches the clock,
And sees it is 3 o'clock.
She gathers up her Robe,
And looks to the above.
The past has gone,
And the new has begun.
For here comes the bride,
All dressed in white.

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  • Shancy Fayre
    March 2, 2008

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    You show a lot of strength in your writing for an eleven year old girl. I really enjoyed this poem. Shancy.