You know what I mean right?
The Phobia of all Phobias…
Wait, come on now.
How could this not be obvious to you?
It has to be, it is inescapable.
The most fearsome of all creatures, you must know.
Well let me tell you…
You become
Dizzy, drunken, delirious…
And have a dry mouth,
(Which in itself is a fearsome crime.)
The feeling in the pit of your stomach,
Intensifies.
Rushing at speeds of mach 7.5,
Draining your face of all color in the process.
Tingling sensations,
Imaginings of those legs crawling
ALL OVER YOU.
The sweating, shaking, insanity comes NOW.
By this time all sense is lost,
The eight legs and eyes of this creature…
GAH!
Looking,
and
creeping
towards you.
Hungry for your fear.
GULP.
Deep breath now.
What ever you do…
Don’t
Scream.
Too late.
The breath whooshes out
No…NO
Too fast.
The ground approaches.
Faster…
BLAM!
You know what I mean right?
The Phobia of all Phobias.
Author notes
All i can say is...gah.
This may not be the best but its what i feel...my ultimate fear.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
The writing itself isn't the best, you're right, but I loved the way you spaced this and made it feel rushed. And, admittedly, this freaked me out. Spiders are the WORST. I attend university in waaaaaaaay northern New York, where the spiders are HUGE and nest in the dormitory windows, stuck between the glass and screen so I can't remove them.... arghhhgdskf
-
spiders? i like spiders. i hate clowns. well writ. my fav is that you don't actually say what it is. well done.
Adding your comment:
