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Directions

No one ever wrote
a handbook for life

Why not?

So many people lose
themselves in the whirlwind

They shouldn't

Because they are lost
they make bad decisions

Like death

Where would you start?
The beginning is where?

Does anyone know?

Can anyone define life
since they are all different.

Probably not

And love, there is
no how-to manual for that

We all wish there was

There are so many questions
that go unanswered

WHY?

Maybe those questions
should go unanswered

They might be inspiring

And maybe it should be
the truly living

That define life

because it isn't
exactly literal.

Science is all about literal





In the end I think
it is we who write

the directions for life









our memories and scars tell all






   

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I have always wondered why life has no explanations.

science doesn't count.


neither does God.

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  • Valley Girl silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    Wow! Another insightful piece. Sometimes we are all left wondering, and asking Why? Great piece.

  • know one
    April 3, 2008

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    I really like this it is verry raw in a good way i have wondered quite a few of thease questions my self I love the way you wrote them...almost like thought running though your head
    awesome keep writting it great!!!


  • Taodesteve
    March 13, 2008

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    An interesting question for you:

    Is death really a bad choice?

    I'll quote the Tao Te Ching:
    "If you want to be reborn
    let yourself die"

    Just trying to make you think

    Steve


    • Nakatrea
      March 14, 2008
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      it can be depending on the situation. " a man doesn't think clearly when his fists are clenched" i don't know who said that but its true too. I did think. suicide is selfish in away. it hurts every except you. you bring yourself peace and others agony. think about it.

      • Taodesteve
        March 15, 2008
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        Death and suicide are two very different topics. If that's what you were thinking then I think you need to re-word that.


  • Menace
    March 5, 2008

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    I like how your writes are almost like a blog or an inner conscience excercise. I tend to appreciate the things that make me wonder.


  • PoetBoy2008
    February 28, 2008

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    wow i got it from the very beggining and all i can say is the end is exactly right kinda there is a manuel but it will never be finished because as we live and die our experiences and scars go in that book and we leave it for those after us so they can learn from our mistakes and add a few of there's in for others to learn from as well.

  • Nakatrea
    February 28, 2008
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    How come nobody gets it until the end???? Life has no directions. we get lost and there is usually nowhere to turn. We often joke about"oh ya well thats what it say in the father's handbook: be silly ALL the time" stuff like that. Nobody can define life. its just ya.


  • crazymomma
    February 28, 2008

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    great!

    At first I didn't get it until the line about the truly living. WOW! Makes me think about the song "unwritten". We all write our own life stories and the choices and chances are what make life wonderful and terrible. We just have to take the reins and live our lives for us. Great, thought provoking poem.


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    February 28, 2008

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    Sweet poem! Hard to understand at first but I got it in the end! Intresting! Great write indeed!!!!! I mean it.

    ~Ruth~

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