It's because of the sparkles
that dance life in your eyes
and need I tell the hour
that you broke life with 'surprise!'
You'd have to recollect some pace
go back into our past
to see the awesomeness of 'now'
and why our lot will last...
Multitudes of base happiness
will glitter up all our nights
these be our companions
accompanying us on gifted sights.
A contest entry
- Answer The Question by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended March 13, 2008, 21 entries
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Ahh words so true. Adelightful read, Thanks for sharing your work, Good luck in the contest.
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ah you have got to love those crazy sparkles that dance in people's eyes, it is the dead eyes like mine you have to watch out for
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They say eyes are the key to the soul, I look for other keys, smile
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Thank you for entering my why contest. Another very interesting take on this prompt. Like many you have used it to write a very nice poem.
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A very creative write. It's like you are answering a specific question instead of a wide open WHY? Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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