The pain I fell is indescribable,
So much anger and rage building up inside.
The tears of my past flowing from my eyes.
Feelings of heartbreak and sorrow
burst through my emotional wall.
No-one understands me,
Everyone always assumes I'm always happy,
Even my parents.
But I'm not.
No-one can imagine what I think of sometimes.
So many ideas to relieve pain
swarm through my mind.
No-one understands how torn up I am inside.
No-one realises how much life hurts.
You think you find someone,
But find out that that's not true.
You get shot down,
Again and again.
Gonna end up alone,
Forever.
Wallowing in a pit of sorrow.
Sometimes I lie awake at night and just think.
Think about how to end this life.
Like they say "Life's a bitch"
And they're right.
You know them days when everything goes well,
And you don't want it to end.
And then there's them other days,
where you can't wait for it to end.
There's NO-ONE for me to talk to.
Parents don't understand me.
Friends don't either.
There's no-one to let everything out to.
NO-ONE AT ALL
so what do you think?
Comments
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Fantastic :)
This poems great, the line "Wallowing in a pit of sorrow" creates fantastic imagery,
Life's a bitch, but you're poems aren't,
You're getting better&better with every write
But people do love you Tim
However; One thing I would consider revising is the title, for something a little more deep,
Other than that, it's great
x0x
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I know just how you feel....
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safe =]
lol sorry about the title like,
this is really good, there's an amazing use of rhyming, it is unusual to see this rhyming style.
i used to be able to relate to the issues in this poem and it is amazinggg =] -
:/ i no how you feel,
you allways have me..
love you
love lozzibeth xxx <3
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