Your eyes are so green
like the lettuce on
my sandwich
Your hair is so brown
like the mud
on my shoe
Your ears are so earlike
like the ears
of everyone else on this planet
Your room is messy
like the handwriting
of my uncle
You are kooky
like the gorilla
at the zoo
and hey,
that's what i like about you!
A contest entry
- OOooo la love by Flight of Dragons.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ok! Great! but you need to tell me what option it is or i wont be a bal to place you under an option so ill have to DQ u sorry!plz maessege me!
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Very original comparisons, no doubt about it.
You got talent, kid.
Keep up the good work! -
oh how cute! I like this it's exactly what I was looking for well done with the cheezy



