Bourbon,
embroidered,
judgment.
Laced,
with,
beauty's,
enchantment.
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Bourbon,
embroidered,
judgment.
bourban and judgment, I would have never put those together, very well said. good form as well
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Holy crap...say hello to the poem of my old lifestyle...
Powerful, dark...and unfortunately, so damned true.
Well done Vik, keep up this great work.
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Lol, It was something random...
I'm glad you liked it, and I will of course keep it up!
Thank's D!
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WOW
Best wishes in life and the contest. Nothing quite like the morning after. Be well Evil and Crazy Sister
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Thank you!
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Alcohol does distort our judgment - girls all look prettier at closing time as the song says. Very true!
Like the "embroidered judgment" as my husband used to be in the embroidery business!
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Thank you for readinga and commenting!
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Oooo... "laced with beauty's enchantment". I love that part. 8D Such beautiful words in here... Very alluring. Much liked!
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Thank's M A R L U X I A!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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oohhh i really liek this alot, such beautiful descriptions, and the words drip so nicely, wonderful write, and good luck in the contest =)
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Thank you!
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