The last thing i remember is laying in my bed
Then im on a ship that is red
I swoop across ropes and land on a dock
As i hear a slight tick tock
A alligator passes as i stand by
as i hear captain hook cry"why oh why"
a pull a map out of my pocket
its connected to my little locket
The locket was me with my mother
my sister my father and my brother
and soon i awoke
to my mother when she spoke
"Get up get out of bed"
i miss the dream land but its still in my head
A contest entry
- For kids 14 and under only by Starz of Heaven.
425 points, ended June 5, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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You have done a nice job here with your poem I have enjoyed this piece thank you for your entry into my contest be well
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