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Hush ~ An Intimate Lullaby





Hush, my sweet baby
let our love croon a lullaby
filled with tender memories
of the happiness you bring
when I look deep into your eyes


whispers to soothe away your pain
a soft caress to meet your sighs
when I will take you into my arms
and we'll dance a slow dance in
the dreams of togetherness we share


thoughts secure in the harmony of
our communion, souls joined by the
intoxicating glance of lovers as
we drift within the warm embrace
of vanilla scented tranquility

 

 

 

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    March 31, 2008
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    Wow, this was so lovely! Thank you for your entry!


  • Kalima
    March 1, 2008

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    I like this one to, specially the last stanza, very powrfull words...Keep it up...
    ~Kaliam~


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 29, 2008

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    A lovely tribute poem, you must love him very much.


    Love and peace
    mj.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 28, 2008

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    Well Done--You just keep writing great verses--one submission after another! --I admire your talent and notice an abundance of talent on AP!
    An enjoyable site with talented writers such as you!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 28, 2008

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    oh auntie this is so beautiufl.it mademe sigh and smile and was lost in the softness and delicacy of your heartfelt words. it was beautifully written and flowed so smoothly.well done auntie I love you

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