Pearl soaked humanity drips through the masquerade.
A contest entry
- 7 WONDERFUL WORDS TO BLOW ME AWAY. by Poesing.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well I'm not a professional poet or anything like that, but I thought I'd try, how do you like it?
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I like it! I don't think any of us are onsidered "professionals", but I may be wrong - there's a lot of great poets and a lot of great minds here at Allpoetry.
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I appreciate the advice. I have met professionals before though and sometimes they get just a bit cranky when you do not follow a certain style. So that phrase just kind of stays there because I do not like to go and explain afterwards to anyone that I definetly am not versed in all things poetic. -_- Oh do I loath trying to write in pentameter.
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Very nic twist with metaphors. This will win most likely. Good luck. Rose
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Thank you Rose.
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wow love the descriptions you used for such few words, wonderfully written, and good luck in the contest =)
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Thank you Stephanie.
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I like it! Kinda hard to read on my computer though
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Thank you! ^_^
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