Heavens kiss
Hells destruction
Destinies path unfolds
A contest entry
- 7 WONDERFUL WORDS TO BLOW ME AWAY. by Poesing.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The contrast is what makes these words so special. Best wishes in this contest. Read again, it is really deeper than one would think!
Shana -
Yea! Ain't ya glad?
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Contrast
I like the use of contrast on this
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Well thats a whole other sort of DEEP! It's like ... new words are popping up every where I look deep. I have to say it what I'm going through now.
I've fallen, I don't want to get up, and some where at the end of my vision there it is. A speck of light so small you would normally miss it.
The best of luck to you!
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A good thought for one to ponder. Good luck. Rose
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Great impact...for seven words!
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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A profound seven words you have penned. Very intriguing. I hope they do well in the contest. Good luck.
Kelli -
hmm i really like this, the contrast between the first and second line is superb, and a nice ending, great job, and good luck in the contest
stephanie =)
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