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Pushing to Hard

Do I get up
Just to be pushed down again
I'm not going to give in
I wont let you push me around
Do I let you push me farther into the ground?
The words you say are digging me in deeper
What did I do wrong?

Was I not a good keeper?
What did I do?
Please tell me
I honestly have no clue
I thought we were meant to be
Till you braught up her name
more then twice a day
I knew you liked her
I should of just stayed away
I'm in deeper
The relationship went grey
It started to hurt
More and more
Day after day
I gave you all of me
was it not enough?
Maybe I really can't handle the truth
You promised to always love me
What happened to that?
You promised you'd never hurt me?

I'm not going to give in
I wont let you push me around
I wont let you push me farther into the ground
I'll walk away silently
Without making any sound

What did I do?
Please tell me
I knew you liked her
Why couldn't I just stay away?
I gave you all of me
But in in the end
It wasn't enough.





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This is some song lyrics I madeup. =/

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  • butterflyink
    January 10, 2009

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    wonderful.

    this depicts such a vivid image, i can feel the pain. I love how it is written, and it would be such a good song.

    * thanks, so much for the comment btw, u dont know how much i appreciate it, the poem had only been up for 4 seconds. You have a talent,
    peace&love
    Butterflyink


  • SpiritMother
    April 18, 2008

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    Great lyrics, now bring out the music and you will have a hit, of that I am sure!

  • tonyher
    March 28, 2008
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    good luck with your song. I think you got something here.


  • DavidWa
    March 14, 2008
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    I know.

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