whisper its sands,
spoke of footprint strands,
sung on hill top, barren,
mythical of charon.
From cracked wind, envision
near ocean steps vision,
journey incision.
In a list
A contest entry
- Take A Walk by HopelessScribbles.
460 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this was very creative and unique. As was said down below a challenge to the winner. It's very easy to imagine as you read each line. Thoughtful, very thoughtful. It's well tuned and sweetly spoken. Great depth and determination!
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This poem has great imagery and is very insightful. I loved it.
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thank u
Thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. I love the applaudes. Saddie23
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like a bow legged ballerina trying to dance swan lake
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i love your insight .... it 's very deep.. well done and well express.. thanks for sharing
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you penned this with great vision, deeper than I was expecting, nice piece within those words, nice entry as I expect a challenge for winner! good luck Moons
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thank u
Thank u for having this contest and it was a pleasure to bring my work to. I'm thankful for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. Saddie23
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