I am so sad
my life is confusing, it makes me mad
I think I'm a good kid,
I've been told that I'm bad
thats how I'll think I am
if thats what Im told
people have told me this,
sence I was a year old
I'm glad my parents have changed
'cause when I was bad they would scoled
they would be angery
and use a voice that was very bold
this didn't make me happy one bit
'cause when my sister was pissed
I would get hit
after that this poor baby girl
would throw a fit
then my sister would complain
"I didn't do it, it was Aim"
so any little thing that happened
I would get the blame
my sister didn't make fourtune,
I didn't make fame, Yet
maybe I'll become a famous poet
Author notes
amyrowsell
wrote this when I was young probley about 17
plaxtonianpoet, cousin
A contest entry
- Please be a part of my AP family by Zenda-Lokki.
450 points, ended March 21, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Life by Kal-El.
650 points, ended August 26, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I would say you have a great future as a poet. Although sad, this was a well written poem. Good luck in the contest. Would be great to have an AP cousin
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I remember
seems I can relate to tis growing up with just a mom and 2 brothers. That abuse stays with us sadly. I have fund that writting helps a lot. So write on
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