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Freedom

Subdued red, orange
Exquisite,fluttering silk
Whispers of freedom

A contest entry

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008
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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form, I felt this was a an excellent write, but you forgot your authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT

  • InBetweenThoughts
    February 28, 2008

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    Upon looking over this again at the judging stage I found that you forgot your authors notes as requested in the rules


  • WingedWolf
    February 28, 2008

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    fire

    the title is freedom, but the poem reminds me of fire. either way, i like it. great job and good luck.