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Love Fool?

My love never impaired this vision
It was always a conscious decision

Blinded rather by reason I failed to see
It was your love always holding onto me

29-02-08

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  • individuality gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, nice rhythm to it and it flows nicely when read aloud, are we not all fools of love?


    • Mezclita
      March 15, 2008
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      Most definitely! I'm just in denial most of the time~ lol

  • Eusebius
    March 8, 2008

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    bravo

    inegmatical,yes, but so very lovely and extremely well woven for shuch a short poem! ... I loved it!! bravo .... bravo... bravo..


  • frownsnfreckles
    February 28, 2008

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    I like the insight in this. Sometimes we are so easily blinded by our own light we cast a shadow on the truth.


  • Kelli Marie
    February 28, 2008

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    Very nicely written. I think it is a beautiful love poem. Uniquely done. I really enjoyed the read. Great.
    Kelli

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