Consider the lilies
see them grow
their beauty on earth
an unmatched show
They do not labor
and do not spin
Yet none is arrayed
in glory as them
So why should I worry
why should I fret
My daily needs
He won't forget
Luke 12:27 “Consider the lilies, how they grow: they neither toil nor spin; but I tell you, not even Solomon in all his glory clothed himself like one of these.
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I loved this little write!
youve taken an amazing qoute from the Bible, modernized it and brought out the meaning perfectly!
It is so true, God never forgets! A very meaningfull poem indeed
God bless,
Susan
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This is the best poem far yet that I've seen..well It being short and all..and I thought you should know that I very much enjoyed It....
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nicely written, i liked how you translated the biblical verse into modern language yet did not lose any of the original meaning
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Very Good
Flows really well and the sentiment is reassuring.
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Excellent
A very fine write, with marvelous verbal imagery to accompany the pic. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
A great take on the prompt and well written.
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wow.. this poem is beautiful. it is so meaningful, to me it screams slow down and look ast nature almost, in a weird way, it's not the immediate vibe, but it's still there
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EXCELLENT!
The write has a lot of meaning in today's world where fear has a lot of people held captive! Very inspirational and it gave me a reminder to rest a while. I love the write. Great Job.
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how sweet to match the lilies in comparison with children ♥ God won't forget... how beautiful is that? That is so beautiful that He won't forget... Thank you for having this poem here to remind us of this.
LOVE, prettypoetry
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yay for daddythis verse from luke u just went beyond expectations of spiritual poetry
its a masterful poem
GOd bless you daddy
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Gorgeous poem!
I love how you wrote the poem for your friend, and I love how you did this poem out of a verse. Good job! This poem is beautiful. It runs so smoothly, and it rhymes!
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This is really beautiful and thought provoking. I really like lilies a lot. They are a beautiful flower
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Ohh. this is so sweet.. The flow in your words bring emotions to the heart that are great..
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I loved the flow and spirit of this poem. Very well written dad.
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it flows really good...i like it a lot...though i am not a fan of the bible, it still has the most beautiful words you could ever read....i love it...great write....
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Beautiful write
You do have a way to bring beauty to one so as a smile always comes to the reader .The pic is breathtaking as well .You have a good day and penn on
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Lovely
Oh so true, it is so humbling to read such a write as this and see Gods word just below it. You are an amazing poet and a wonderful brother in Christ Jesus our Lord. Of love that scripture you chose to write upon, or maybe you didn't, maybe you wrote the poem and God gave you the scripture. Well either way it is perfect. The picture is beautiful and so it the poem. Excellent Write, thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry and share the Lord with me.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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I love this take on Luke 12:27. It is beautifully written. I know it was written for Vickie, but I find it encouraging to me, too. I really needed to read this today!
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awwwww daddy this is a beautiful dedication your words are so touching amongst the page and full of your love and kindness.well done
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this is amazing and I was thinking about this same subject earlier today that we worry when there is no need because our father in heaven know our needs and he loves us so.excellent picture perfect write God bless
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that was really really great. i wholeheartedly enjoyed reading that. thank you
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Truelly beautifull! The flow is great and I love that you have combined a verse from the Bible with you poem, it really makes the piece. I sort of wrote a poem like this once, its called "Set me as a Seal". It is from the book of Solomon so you might like it. Anyhoo, Great write!
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Lillies are my favorite flower!
Pretty good piece you have hear.. So simple and pieceful that it makes you think of life and how obssesed we are with things that don't really matter!
Nice work, keep it up and take care,
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excellent flow and rhyme..and the uplifting message is wonderful..I know Vickie will appreciate such a lovely gift of friendship..thanx so much for sharing..blessings namaste..
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So profound. Such rich color in this wisdom you have shared. And bless you for caring so much for a struggling friend in that you wrote a priceless poetic reminder for her. Your words travel even to places you don't yet know of. I drew a measure of comfort myself as I know others will.
This life is certainly some kind of endurance test and we all endure, struggle and find our way somehow. We should not worry, this is true. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful, nurturing and loving part of yourself.
Be blessed!
--Kel
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Beautiful write and the lilies very pretty. Thank you for the enjoyable read
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I do love this Mark, Thank you it is very beautiful... yes I know he will never forget
even when I get stressed I know there is always God to calm me and to take care of me and my kids
Vickie
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She is so beautiful in heart and soul, and I know she will love this. May it soothe her sweetly and I pray God will take all her stress away soon.
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WOW.... can you like read my mind???? hehehe i was just thinking of that verse..and found a picture of lilies with it on it. Shared it with one of the groups I'm in...
you're wonderful. This is gorgeous. Thanks Daddy.
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Mom will love this it is so true I love her so much
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