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You're Not Alone

There is never a time
That the heart does not ache
For that lost love
That turned out to be fake
You feel so lonely
And torn apart from the world
Will anyone ever find you
That lost and hurting girl

You’re not alone
Not matter what happens now
I’ll reach out my hand
Know that you’ve been found
You’re heart may be broken
And tears may fill your eyes
But you can come with me
Regardless if I can call you mine

So he left you high and dry
But you knew the time had come
But you wished desperately
That this life wouldn’t come undone
He left you all alone
But you refused to accept
That he abused your heart
Yet you felt in debt

You’re not alone
Regardless of how you feel
Look into the world
Know that even if the pain is real
Life isn’t always harsh
There are plenty of fish in the sea
Though he let you go
It was meant to be

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  • LunaAmara
    March 4, 2008
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    wow--this is great!
    it made me feel so much better after everything I've been dealing with


    • Heart of Darkness
      March 6, 2008
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      I'm glad you liked it, and I really appreciate the comment. Also, thanks for faving me, that's something new!

      If you ever want me to write anything, just ask. I'm willing to do free writes and stoof, I gotta get back into my writing swing.

      You're Poem was really beautiful too.


  • hopes of sorrow
    February 29, 2008

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    WOW!! I really like this one ... though it does remind me of someone...gee...lol. Good job buddy ol' pal of mine

    • Heart of Darkness
      March 2, 2008
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      It was totally random. Who does it remind of? I was just thinking kinda liz, but then I was like meh, this is for me enjoyment.


  • SereneAzure
    February 28, 2008
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    nice poem!

    great work!
    This is a sweet poem, I think it would touch any girl's heart

    • Heart of Darkness
      February 28, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the comment. I decided I should try to write something and post since it's been awhile.

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