He doesn't know that she has been crying.
Her eyes haven't been dry for weeks now.
& her hopes have been slowly slipping,
her future is a blur.
He doesn't know that all of her friends know her feelings.
And he has no slightest clue.
And hearing all the confusion.
Is enough to dephen her from the truth of it all.
He doesn't know that she not only sheds tears,
she crys blood. she burns and has no way to hide.
Her friends know.
He doesn't know.
& he doesn't know that shes about to give up.
Shes about to let her hopes fall on her.
Too much she can bear.
Without knowing how he really feels.
She doesn't know neither.
Author notes
Again, about that ex-boyfriend. I seemed to have written a lot about him. But hey, I like the results when I try to get things out onto paper!
A contest entry
- Painful Desires by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended March 6, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a good poem,
if it is personal,
i would be willing to try and help you,
anyway good luck in the contest,
love vamp xxxx -
You're a great writer! I can definately sense your emotion, keep writing from your heart and hopefully someday that ex will get the picture.
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