That look in her eye
Was simply so divine
It stirred me all up inside
And made me feel so fine
The curve upon her pretty lips
As she spoke such simple word
That all flew upon angels wings
Kissing my ears to be heard
The touch of her gentle hand
Sparked me with such desire
And when I hold her so close
I feel like I’m filled with fire
When she softly kisses me
It sparks me deep into the bone
It is then that I come to realize
Just how long I’ve been alone
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love. No PW by LanguishedLad.
700 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a beautiful love poem...whomever it is for is very fortunate. It started off in past tense then changed to the present, but the transition went smoothly. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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well penned
I liked this, keep up the good writing. best of luck in the conttest
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