He'll stand on a mountain in the dark of the night.
He'll look to the sky and with himself he'll fight.
The moon is full and there's a battle from within.
The beast about to morph has chosen to win.
His mind is clouded with thoughts he can't control.
The animal from within has stolen his soul.
He'll scream in the darkness from all the torture and pain.
The stretch from the beast will drive him insane.
His flesh will shed and fur like wire will grow.
His eyes will turn crimson with a devilish glow.
Fingers will curdle into claws of a beast.
Teeth will devour us as their midnight feast.
Howls and screams are his nightly routine.
The carnage he leaves is one hell of a scene.
Stay clear of the night and know it's not a dream.
Or you too will be part of his howls and screams.
Author notes
"painful surrender
option # 4..Kassy is a Freak
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Comments
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VERY DEEP...I LOVE IT!
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Love the picture and this was a great dark write, the images of transformation from human to beast were done so well that I could picture it happening. Thanks for your entry
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Eek, very eerie... I have always found rabid animals scary and also things that go bump in the night, put them together and yeah, I wouldn't like this situation very much, wouldn't last one second.
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this is a very nice write. and the picture i like it alot. thank you for entering my contest. Best of luck to you
~Angelic Princess~
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Wow this is fantastically done! Love the picture, it matches your words perfectly. I do like the line..
Fingers will curdle into claws of a beast.
very creative and different. Superbly penned
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wow this is simply amazing,
the rhymeing scheme, and the style,
not to mention the plot,
i love it,
good luck in the contest,
all my love,
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This is so powerful, such amazing description. The imagery of the werewolf is absoultly stunning. Thank you so much for sharing this with my contest. A little dark for my current mood, but maybe in a week or so it might appeal more to my mood.
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Wow.! I really like! Thanks for the comment I'm glad you liked! It was just a heat of the moment kind of poem I just joined like a week ago or something but its nice to no someone appreciates my poems!!
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same as Gingerkid
i love wolves ... mysterious ... sweet ... rough .... honor....
your poem made my day better , thabkyou
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creepy.
I love it.
And the picture is fantastic.
All gory and bloody.
Just the way werewolves should be.
Great write.
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Spooky!!! I'm liking the dark side of you! A great werewolf tale!!!
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Um....
Uncle Shawn, I'm scared of WereWolves 
but I loved this Darkside Awww...I see my baby Wayne been thru, of course, he is the KING at what he does. Good ppl he is, now you did this, and I liked it, I stopped by to show LOVE...now what you got 
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This is an awesome piece on werewolves. I grew up watching these old movies and still love them today. The old B&W ones are simply the best, although I have a few favorites filmed in color too!
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STUNNING
STUNNING WRITING. I LOVED THIS. BRILLIANT FLOW AND RHYME TO THIS PIECE. DARK, FEARSOME AND POWERFUL INDEED. WONDERFUL STUFF.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE LEON
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