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A change of heart


London was wrapped in a cold grey overcoat
Buses bustled busily
Taxis trawled for trade
And I stood and looked
Wondering why the World was so weary

The sun had swept the streets yesterday
Today was grey and grim
Dull dreary day
Nothing to make me smile
Then I saw the roses and thought of you

And smiled.

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I had to walk to the datacentre at lunchtime. This was my walk.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 28

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    well detailed..next time take me on the walk please. would rather see that view then throught the windows of a cafeteria (we cant leave campus) ah well.

    love,
    passions


  • moonbumps silver member
    February 28

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    I think you're there already-you just don't know you are-whatever it is-it's worth it Jeff babes. xxx


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    February 28
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    And that... is the way to do it, sunshine!


    • cricketjeff gold member
      February 28
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      I think I am getting near to what I want to do. What I don't yet know is if it is worth doing.

      • PassionsPromise gold member
        February 28
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        anything you do is worth doing. Why? Cause it teaches the rest of us who want to pen like you.
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