Spreading the seeds of salvation
while people stand in desperation
traveling through an empty land
uncapable of being able to understand.
The gift of peace within God's holy
reach but unwilling to accept the
loving words that I preach...
Author notes
I know that I went over but I couldn't shorten it any more than what I did... I hope that It won't disqualify me...
A contest entry
- Take A Walk by misticmoonlite.
460 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Most people believe what they believe and that is all that they want. Some people believe what they believe but are willing to take in others talk, and some are full believers. It is true that this world is spiraling down, from creator to workers, and this they say is the key to success, so why arent we achieving?
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beautiful post here, the nature walk is a journey of its own, thank you for this entry, good luck...Moons
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I ACCEPT YOUR TRUTHFUL LOVING WORDS EXCELLENT MY FRIEND GOD BLESS
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this is so good, so true, it could be used with a musical background,thank you for this entry,good luck, I consider all entries , if not to much over as I have done it as well..lol ty
moons
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