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Renegade

A pit in my stomach
A chill up my spine
Guess it's from losing
All that I cared about

Does it even matter?
Not anymore
Fuck everything
I'm tired of the lies

I want to stop caring
Let go of it all
But I don't have the guts
To simply give up

It's all I've got left
But it's nothing at all
Would he even try to stop me
If I just walked away?

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  • saretyuiop
    March 23, 2008
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    Me to. Listen to ShadedRequiem if you wont listen to me. Over all though, very touching...


  • ShadedRequiem
    March 6, 2008

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    Wow. This is awesome!! Stop being sad though. For the last time, I love you very very much, and I would cry if you just walked away.