Theres nothing here to be saved
I guess im just to afraid..
I dont know what happens when the
tide collides
or when its
time to say goodbye,
I think it'd all be much easier
If all this was just a lie
but I dont want it to be.
I'm way to much content with
Reality
And if I start to feel any less
Dangerous,
I'll have to break this complicated equation
Down for us
And I'm not saying that it's okay,
If you were to just
walk
a w a y.
With tears forming
At the cracks of my eyes, I'd ask you to stay
At least...just one more day
And we'll be holding onto
Memories
With the goodbyes floating in the sea
It's not something we can fake
defenitly not something we'll be able to take
But,
We have to make it
Or else the future will be much more bland
walking across an empty street
No one to sweetly hold a hand,
Or glance at me causally sideways
We'll make it. because i won't just sit on
The yesterdays
And though I like remembering
The memories,
They are worthless and pointless, and not well ment
If you
are absent
In Our Future
© 2008, Angie Romans. All rights reserved.
No republication of this material, in any form or medium, is permitted without express permission of the author.
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I really liked this one... Very pretty
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I really liked this poem it reminds me of someone I love that just kinda walked away a couple of days ago.I feel like I want to cry
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Sweet! The Other Kendal described the neglect of spell check very well, and I guess that's the only downfall that really struck me with this, and correct grammar and spelling is vital, you know. I highly reccomend it!
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Awwww...
That was really sweet.
"and though i like remembering
the memories,
they are worthless and pointless, and not well ment
if you
are absent
in our future"
The minimal punctuation, the lack of capitalization, and the spelling errors turned it from heart-wrenching to cute and young, like puppy love. But the emotions are real, and easy to relate to.
The flow really was amazing, hmmm...I think "quirky" is almost the word I'm looking for, with rhymes in strange places. Odd, different...refreshing.
Well done.
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I really enjoyed this especially the ending. Sometimes is not enough to only have memories, you want them to stay in your life. Great flow in this as well. Thanks for sharing!
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One word son lyrics. This was emotional and easy to relate to good job.
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You have this whole thing, the way you write, that makes me gasp at the end of each line or stanza (depends on how it's worded). So, keep up the good work! ^_^
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Powerful emotion and nice imagery. A few spelling/ grammar errors but nice. ex. line 2 to, too toward end ment, meant. but I like the poem a lot. Good emotion.
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thanks for writing this poem, i needed to read something like this today
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I really like everything about this one, from the background, to the arrangement to the simple and uncomplicated rhyme...well done. I know how you feel, it's almost like being with the person, however imperfect they are is much better than being without them. Thanks for sharing.
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i simply like how this piece flowed well
and the simple words joined together
were just perfect =]
i pretty much like the theme here ^^
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OMG I love this...
it's well written, emotional, and has a good flow...
I can definitely relate. Beautiful word usage too. Well penned, poet...
~QoA
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oh, this is so calming. im so glad i found this!
relatable stufffff man~
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thanks =]<3
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