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.:Its Yellow Wonder:.

stuttering
with the put put putttering of
rainwater.
  titlted head[sideways] looking in
ma-ma-manyways, the world --
in a new way
skitter sk-atter of
pixiesticks and shredded
poetryonpaper
  walking in a straight line,
  in the middle of the sunshine,

its a yellow wonder

© 2008, Angie Romans. All rights reserved.
No republication of this material, in any form or medium, is permitted without express permission of the author.

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  • Dragomiloff
    March 7, 2008
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    I loooove it so much...I'm bookmarking! three thousand applause!

  • Justin3
    March 7, 2008

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    I can't really make sense of this, but that makes it all the more interesting and intelligent.Great poem!


  • Upstairs
    March 6, 2008

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    This is a very interesting poem! I like how you incorporated the stuttering..it's original. It flows really well and just sounds really good!

    I really like it, great job!